*This is the last post of this Drama Series, the complete edition will be published.
*This story was edited by John Ovuson
*This story was edited by John Ovuson
INTERCUT:
Used to switch scenes usually when a call is taking place.
CONT’D: Continuation of the voice over or speech. INT: Interior (Sitting room, bedroom, car etc.)
EXT: Exterior
(Streets, outside the house etc.)
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EPISODE FOUR: SOMETHING
IS NOT RIGHT
SCENE1
INT. BETTY’S LAWN - NOON
FADE IN
Kingsley parked at the side path close
to Betty’s lawn. Betty gets down from Kingsley’s car upset, with her face squeezed
like a cloth dumped for months.
KINGSLEY
(Clenches fist)
Betty… come back
here right now!!!
BETTY
(Squint eyes)
I’m sick and
tired of acting like your pet all the time!
You are no human;
you treat everyone like a cheap trash.
Check out the
way you splashed water on Gideon the other day, or the way you talk to my
friends, even the way you talk to the waiter and now you slap my butt right in
public.
KINGSLEY
Babe c’mon,
lemme explain what I wanted doing…
BETTY
(Disappointed)
Explain what
Kingsley?
You’re using me
to brag?
Or you’re not
man enough to carry your own self without me being beside you?
KINGSLEY
What are you
feeling like?
I got my ego
right on check; I got swag and everything in check too.
I don’t think
there is any need begging you cos I’m tired of banging you.
BETTY
(Shocked)
What did you
just say?
KINGSLEY
(Mean)
You heard me
right; I didn’t choose to walk away in the first place.
My words got
your attention, though I meant it.
BETTY
Kingsley… you
know what?
KINGSLEY
I don’t want to
know alright?
I’m out of here.
Kingsley turns to walk away, leaving
Betty at her lawn, not speechless but placed on a spell of wanting to call
Kingsley’s name; knowing fully well he is not listening.
SCENE 2
INT. BETTY’S BEDROOM – CONTINUOUS
Betty bursts into her room with a door
slamming approach just as SWAT does but this time, in tears as a victim of
heart break. No not just “heartbreak” I’d rather call it “heart quake”.
Betty; confused on what to do, soaks her
pillow in tears as she drowns in the pool. She picks up her phone and sought
for whom to share her grief with.
(PHONE RINGING)
BETTY
(Into Phone)
Hello!!!
What’s up?
(Pause)
Na I’m not okay.
(Pause)
I’m kinda sick.
(Pause)
Don’t really
know what’s wrong.
(Pause)
Can you please
come over?
(Pause)
Please it’s
urgent I need you around; really need someone to talk to.
(BETTY ENDS CALL)
BETTY’S (v.o)
I just hope he
gets here soon.
I can’t sleep
tonight if this goes on.
(30 MINUTES LATER)
AMAKA
Sister Betty,
there is a guy looking for you.
He said you
asked him to come.
BETTY
Yes where is he?
AMAKA
He is at porch,
I didn’t open for him, wanted to confirm from you.
BETTY
Okay I am
coming, let him inside.
AMAKA
Are you okay? I
mean is everything alright?
I don’t like how
sober you’re looking; like you lost someone.
Mum didn’t put
us in anguish, so I don’t expect you sad like we’re suffering.
BETTY
Don’t worry;
when you grow up someday, you’d know how I feel.
AMAKA
Forget that
thing… I’m already grown up.
BETTY
(Shouts)
I thought I asked
you to do something right now?!
AMAKA
I just wonder
the day we’d have a straight conversation without you yelling at me.
BETTY (v.o)
The day I’d beat
this girl is coming real soon.
Okay lemme do my
make over; don’t wanna look like a widow before him.
Betty gets dressed, looking very sharp
and sexy as though she’s in a strip club even though she’s in her house. At
this moment, if a guest comes in, he’d think he’s in a five star brothel cos
Amaka is representing the playboy hood.
SCENE 3
INT. BETTY’S SITTING ROOM – CONTINUOUS
BETTY
I’m so happy you
made it here Gideon
GIDEON
(Smiles)
It’s okay.
BETTY
Thanks a lot how
have you been?
GIDEON
I’ve been great
and perfect.
You didn’t sound
so okay on the phone earlier; what was wrong?
BETTY
Well actually,
it’s just some kind of girls’ ish.
Don’t worry… I
am fine.
GIDEON (v.o)
No, not again.
I didn’t travel
all the way to come hear the “I’m okay speech”.
Why in God’s
name will she call me over?
She purposely
dressed seductive.
Something is up
and I better not fall this time.
(Turns to Betty)
I’m no kid.
I know the voice
I heard over the phone.
Or you think I’m
not man enough to handle it?
BETTY (v.o)
Oh shit where
will I start from?
I don’t even
know what pushed me to call him over.
Maybe I should
open up.
(Turns to
Gideon)
Well, I don’t
think you’d be pleased to hear what I have to say but I see you as someone I
can trust.
It’s about this
guy, you know him. He keeps treating me like an object and that really offends
me.
Gideon sits and watches how she explains
her frustration over dating Kingsley.
BETTY CONT’D
...so I figured
out you are a cool guy, like one of the nicest guy among my friends and I
thought I should share my probs with you.
GIDEON
Okay this is
really weird; never saw it coming.
By the way when
was the last time I came here?
BETTY
Like hmm…
3months back; you visited January, few weeks after New Year.
GIDEON
Sharp memory of
yours.
BETTY
(Smiles)
Yeah thanks
dear.
Maybe that’s why
they made me class prefect several times in secondary school.
GIDEON
That’s
impressive.
Well, what do I
have to say about you and your boyfriend?
No girl would like to be treated like a trash; but if you want it, you get it.
No girl would like to be treated like a trash; but if you want it, you get it.
You need to be
sure of what you want.
BETTY
I want a guy
that would treat me nice, pamper me, call me up at night before I sleep and
send me cute early morning messages just like you did back then.
GIDEON (v.o)
Did I just hear
that?
Meaning I was
almost winning then?
This is great
news, but now…
(Turns to Betty)
Why didn’t you
just say something then?
BETTY
I felt if I had
opened up to you, you will take me for granted.
Right now my
eyes are open and I feel it’s someone like you I deserve.
GIDEON
(Stammers)
Well hum you…
I… hum…
(GIDEON’S CELL PHONE RINGS)
GIDEON (v.o)
Oh shit! not now
things are getting better.
(ANSWERS PHONE)
(Into phone)
Hey!!! Baby how
are you?
I had to come
see a friend….
BETTY (v.o)
What Gideon has
a girlfriend now?
C’mon you dumb
girl!!!
The word “baby”
can be used for anyone these days…
GIDEON CONT’D
(Into phone)
…Yeah I didn’t
plan staying long, but one talk to another…
(Pause)
It’s a guy of
course, don’t worry I’d be with you sooner than you think okay
(Pause)
Love you, bye.
BETTY (v.o)
Okay that is his
girlfriend.
Shit and I just
opened up to him.
I should have
kept my mouth shut.
(Turns to
Gideon)
So I’m a boy now
huh?
GIDEON
Well you know
how you ladies protect your man from other ladies’ spell.
She is securing
her investment and I’m ensuring she feels secured.
BETTY
Impressive!!!
I didn’t know
you’d make a good lover.
GIDEON
Now you know.
It’s not like anything could work between us.
BETTY
How sure are
you?
Betty leaves her seat for the one beside
Gideon.
BETTY CONT’D
(Softly)
What is your
girlfriend’s name?
GIDEON
Stephanie.
BETTY
Well maybe I can
borrow Steph’s boyfriend for a while to make me complete.
She takes his hands and leads him to her
room.
SCENE 4
EXT. POOLSIDE BAR – NOON
Gideon and Steph went swimming. While at
the poolside bar, Steph’s looks blows open the eyes of the seated males around
as she sips her drink before Gideon who is just staring at his phone probably
reading text messages he shared with Betty.
GIDEON
…so how has
school been all this while?
STEPH
Well it’s been
okay, just kinda lonely you know.
GIDEON
It’s good we
could meet up today and at least talk about all we’ve missed out.
STEPH
You and your
busy schedule in church and all that…
GIDEON
(Cuts in)
Baby I am here
for you okay? I am not going anywhere.
(STEPH PHONE RINGS)
Steph looks at her phone and she sees
its Lucas calling.
STEPH (v.o)
Shit shit
shit!!!
Why is Lucas
calling me now I’m with Gideon?
I just have to
act cool so he won’t suspect anything.
(ANSWERS CALL)
STEPH CONT’D
(Into phone)
Hey sup?
(Pause)
I came for
swimming with my boyfriend Gideon.
(Pause, Giggles)
I don’t know,
maybe later tomorrow evening.
(Pause, Blushes)
Okay Bye.
(STEPH CUTS CALL)
GIDEON
Who called?
STPEH
Lucas.
GIDEON
You sure nothing
is cooking up with him?
STEPH
(Frowns)
What is the
meaning of that?
GIDEON
Cos I see the
way you smile while you talk to him.
It’s been a
while you gave me that kind of smile.
STEPH (v.o)
Jesus, my cover
is almost blown.
I need to do
something to cover up.
(GIDEON PHONE RINGS)
Gideon looks at his phone and he sees
its Betty calling
GIDEON (v.o)
Shit, why is
this chick calling me now?
If Steph hears
me talk to Betty, she’d be pissed.
(Turns to Steph)
I got to pick
this call; it’s my pastor’s secretary calling.
STEPH
Why can’t you
answer the call here?
GIDEON
This place is a
bit noisy, I told her I was sick today so I can steal time to be with you.
So I need to act
real sick in a quiet place.
STEPH
Hmm...
Okay oh. when I
excuse myself to start picking calls, don’t say anything oh… cos you started it
first.
Gideon provokes over her words walks out
with anger. As Gideon runs to a secluded place to speak to Betty, Steph picks
up her phone to call Lucas back and apologise.
SCENE 5
INT. KINGSLEY’S APARTMENT - CONTINUOUS
(FEW MINUTES AGO)
Same time Gideon and Steph chilled at
the poolside bar, Betty went to see Kingsley. Betty could not hold herself
anymore for her body longs for Kingsley’s embrace.
BETTY
What is this
white stuff on your nose?
KINGSLEY
It’s hmm… milk.
BETTY
Since when did
you start sniffing milk?
KINGSLEY
I was hmm…
drinking milk from a big cup so, some stained my nose.
BETTY
I thought it
ought to be the upper lips or beards it stains, not the nose.
Kingsley, are
you doing dru…
Before Betty could complete the word
“drugs” Kingsley’s cell phone rings and its Speed calling.
(KINSLEY ANSWERS CALL)
KINGSLEY
(Into phone)
Yo… wadup speed?
SPEED (v.o)
(Over phone,
filtered)
Not too good man
did you get the coke?
KINGSLEY
(Into phone)
Yeah I got the
shit… damn its good.
What’s the
matter over there?
SPEED (v.o)
(Over phone,
filtered)
My boss is mad
at me.
I lost a race
for the first time in my life, Goddammit!!!
KINGSLEY
(Into phone)
Shit that’s not
good, who is the nigger.
SPEED (v.o)
(Over phone,
filtered)
Some guy called
Kelechi.
Amma break his
legs soon enough, he won’t be able to enter a wheel chair.
KINGSLEY
(Into phone)
I trust you on
that one.
SPEED (v.o)
(Over phone,
filtered)
Don’t mean to
spoil your day with my bad day hommie.
KINGSLEY
(Into phone)
It’s okay.
Don’t just kill someone close to you, that’s
all.
(KINGSLY DROPS CALL)
BETTY
You rolling with
Speed?
Do you want to
get yourself killed?
KINGSLEY
Betty this is
none of your business. Let me just do my thing.
BETTY
You know how
notorious that guy is, he has gone to prison how many times and he doesn’t want
to quit his evil act.
Who knows who
will follow him next to jail?
KINGSLEY
(Shouts)
Enough!!!
I won’t allow
you nag around my house.
That’s the door
if you are uncomfortable with my friendship with Speed.
BETTY
(Sobs)
I came all the
way to see you and this is how you treat me…
Kingsley picks his phone and scrolls
through it; ignoring every word that flies out of Betty lips. Betty walks out
of Kinsley’s apartment and decided to give Gideon a call.
SCENE 6
EXT. SOMEWHERE AROUND THE POOL – NOON
Gideon looks for somewhere quiet and
reserved so he can talk to Betty easily.
GIDEON
(Into phone)
Baby, how are
you?
INTERCUT WITH BETTY’S LOCATION
BETTY
(Into phone)
(Sobs)
I’m okay.
GIDEON (v.o)
(Over phone,
filtered)
No you are not
okay, what is the matter this time?
(SOUNDTRACK FADES IN: RUSH INTO MY ARMS)
BETTY
(Into phone)
No… everything
is not okay.
GIDEON (v.o)
(Over phone,
filtered)
Where are you…?
Lemme come pick you up.
BETTY
(Into phone)
Don’t worry, I’d
just…
INTERCUTS WITH GIDEON’S LOCATION
KINGSLEY
(Over phone,
filtered)
(Faintly)
Betty… come over
here!!!
BETTY
Kingsley yes…
Betty gets carried away when Kingsley
called her back; she forgets Gideon is on the phone as she loose guarded herself
into confirming his suspicion that she visited Kingsley.
(BETTY DROPS THE CALL)
GIDEON (v.o)
(Angry)
I can’t believe
she went back to him.
And she even cut
the call on me.
Let me try the
number again.
NETWORK OPERATOR
(Female’s voice)
The number you
have called is switched off… please try again later.
STEPH
(Cuts in)
How long will it
take you to answer a call?
Gideon startles throws his phone into
the mid-air and catches it back swiftly to avoid crashing on the floor.
GIDEON
(Scoffs)
Sorry, I had to
pull the sickness well which activated her praying mood.
STEPH
I’m hungry
please lets go and eat.
I barely used
the pool…
GIDEON
(Cut in)
Forget about
swimming.
Let’s go home
and eat instead cos I need to rush somewhere right now.
STEPH
But I thought
you took a day off for me?
GIDEON
Yeah I did, just
that I need to get something done quickly.
STEPH
(Frowns)
Okay, it’s
alright.
SCENE 6
INT. JAMAL’S APARTMENT – EVENING
Steph gives Jamal a visit.
STEPH
…at that point
when my phone rang my heart was just beating so fast.
I didn’t even
know what to tell Lucas.
JAMAL
You’d have said
something like “let me call you back later”
STEPH
No Gideon would
know I am hiding something. He has been suspecting me and Lucas anyway.
There was a
night he called me and I mistakenly told him I’m at Lucas apartment working on
an assignment.
JAMAL
(Shocked)
What were you
thinking?
STEPH
(Softly)
I don’t know.
Shit something must be wrong with me.
JAMAL
Of course there
is something wrong with you.
Oliver twist.
Just like that
D’banj’s song.
You’re an Oliver
Oliver Oliver twist.
As Jamal plays with Steph, there was a
knock on the door; lo and behold, it’s Alice. Alice pays Jamal a surprise
visit. It’s been days now and Jamal hasn’t called or send a text message.
STEPH
Are you
expecting anyone?
JAMAL
Nope.
Let me check who
it is.
(Walks to the
door)
What the f…
What’re you
doing here?
ALICE
I came to check
up on you.
Long-time no
see, chat or text.
I came to do it
the old school way.
JAMAL
Yeah… you’re
really keeping it old school.
Come inside.
Steph, look at
who we got here.
Ta-da Alice!!!
STEPH
Wow is she the
one Jamal?
She’s beautiful.
(Turns to Alice)
Jamal has been
disturbing about you all this while.
Alice this,
Alice that. Phew!!!
I’ve been wanting
to see this almighty Alice.
Here you are.
I’m…
ALICE
(Cuts in)
Steph.
STEPH
How did you know
my name?
ALICE
Jamal just
called your name few seconds ago.
STEPH
(Surprised)
Oh yeah… thats
smart of you.
Jamal, what are
you offering our guest?
JAMAL
Gist and dancing
of course.
STEPH
Yay!!!
Let the party start.
Wowwwww!!!
Steph didn’t excuse Jamal and Alice to
have a cool conversation, she stays with them all through even when they decide
to excuse themselves, and she pleads for their presence, she can’t stay alone.
This provokes Jamal and he leaves the apartment for Alice and Steph to get to
know each other and probably give Steph the opportunity to woo Alice into his
arms. He leaves to get Alice a refreshing drink from a nearby store.
STEPH
(Faintly)
I guess I have
seen you around.
ALICE
(Faintly)
I do not doubt
that,
I do walk with one classy chick that boys are
dying for.
Nneka is her
name.
STEPH
Where is she
now? She’s not with you.
ALICE
She went to her
boyfriend’s house.
Abeg die the
matter (please forget the matter.)
STEPH
So how long have
you known Jamal?
ALICE
Well… just a
short while though.
Enough about me,
I didn’t come here to get interviewed.
How about you?
Are you Jamal’s
girlfriend?
STEPH
(Disgusted)
Hell no
We are just
friends.
ALICE
What kind of
friend?
Friends with
benefits?
STEPH
Yeah right… you
can say that again.
But lemme tell
you something you need to know about Jamal…
ALICE
I’m listening.
SCENE 7
INT. KINGSLEY’S APARTMENT - NIGHT
Kingsley happens to be dating Nneka for
a short while without Betty’s knowledge. Kingsley sniffed coke earlier before
Nneka his new catch visited him in his lovely one bedroom apartment where he
has defiled so many girls including Betty and her numerous girlfriends whom his
swag never stops amusing.
Nneka sees Betty’s picture hanging on
the wall, this activates the mine field of anger she constructed over Betty all
this while. Kingsley could barely pay attention to what she says; she attacks
him with her machine-gun-mouth.
NNEKA
Why are you such
a psychotic idiot?
You mean you
love Betty more than me?
KINGSLEY
Nneka shut the
fuck up!!!
NNEKA
What?
It’s
unbelievable how you think you can use women just like that.
I’m not a sort
of toy you just fuck and leave like that.
Why is my
picture not on the wall?
Why is this
bitch’s pic still hanging on there?
Am I not giving
you enough sex or what?
Or she has more
ass than I do?
C’mon Kingsley,
answer me…
Kingsley, already pissed with her
nagging walks to his fridge, picks up a bottle of MacDowell and takes a quaff
ruthlessly. The whisky muffles Nneka’s voice in his ears. He walks away from
her; she follows him as though he magnets the opposite charges in her.
She hits him on his head to grab his
attention, unknowing to her that she just triggered his action mood.
Kingsley twists her hand like a wet
cloth that needs to be wrung. He sweeps her legs off the ground, uses one his
left hand to hold her neck and the other to punch her brutally on the face.
KINGSLEY
I-AM-NOT-YOUR-TOY!!!
FUCK-YOU!!!
I-KILL-YOU!!!
Before he finishes his statement and
expression of anger, Nneka pass out and lay lifeless in his apartment.
He picks up his phone and makes a call.
KINGSLEY
(Into phone)
Speed!!!
I did it mehn
SPEED (v.o)
(Over phone, filtered)
Did what?
KINGSLEY
I killed her, I
didn’t mean to.
SPEED (v.o)
(Over phone,
filtered)
Killed who, what
do you mean.
KINGSLEY
This coke you
gave me is so good, I got carried away and she made me angry so I just passed
it on her.
I need you to come
help me out.
SPEED (v.o)
(Over phone,
filtered)
Help you with
what?
KINGSLEY
Dump the body I
mean mehn.
You have a junk
yard; c’mon you can squeeze some help for a bro.
SPEED (v.o)
(Over phone,
filtered)
Shit mehn!!!
Okay… amma be
there soon.
(CALL ENDS)
Sooner than Kingsley could imagine,
Speed arrives at his apartment with a truck so they can easily package Nneka’s
body and dump it.
Kingsley gets into the ride acting
confused while Speed rides as though he is a garbage man on duty.
They reach the junk yard, Speed orders
Kingsley to get the body out. He does it sluggishly and Speed assists to hasten
up.
They dump the body at the back seat of a
wrecked car and drive off swiftly.
Nneka’s body lies there lifeless with
bloodstain on her cloth and the right hand she used in holding her head while
Kingsley pummels life out of her. Her bloody right hand moves slowly as she
sleeps off.
Buy the book when its published, so many trut, lies, action, explosions are yet to be unveiled.
As for the soundtrack lol that was me just testing the mic, I'm more of a writer than a singer so don't laugh at the voice much.
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